Jakadasnake's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dad n' Me - Dad's Secret]

I laughed!

See above.

Shadowii2 responds:

Haha, nice it had that effect, thanks for the review!

[FTR #1]

Cute and short

But you could have worked a little more to expand on the idea. I'm sure you could have gotten some more laughs out of it. ;)

Also I loved the voice of the girl. Was really cute.

CatsomStudios responds:

Yeah, thanks!

[Wrath ofShadow ep. 6.2]

It was just alright.

While it is apparent that you spent time creating this movie, it's also apparent that you could have spent a little more. It's unpolished and there are quite a few things that could be improved to make it more enjoyable to watch.

-Sprite Animation
-Spelling (this is a big one, there were tons of spelling errors)
-Use punctuation! It makes text-based dialogue a lot more interesting.
-Storyline

As far as the storyline portion, you need to let us know a little bit more about what's going on. One of the characters said something to the effect of "I cleansed it in someway" and that was just too vague. If everything happens just "somehow", it's a lot less creative and a lot less interesting. Another instance where this happened was when Zero forced Okiname (sp?) out of his body. Just expand on those ideas a bit so we know what's going on.

Technical Issues:
The 'Play All' button does not work.
Putting in scrollable text (using buttons or, perhaps, the spacebar?) would add to the continuity a lot since the viewer could read the text at his or her own pace.

Shi-Gu responds:

Well, I will try to put in prectice all that you said and I will repair everything I can

[Nix Timelapse]

Interesting

This was an interesting animation, and especially will appeal to artistic minds because it shows the process he took in creating his character through several layers.
It lacked presentation, however, and after the final product is created the flash immediately loops back to the starting screen, giving the viewer no time to look at the end result.

I liked the music.

liable-to-explode responds:

Thanks! Very helpful.